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Without Due Care

haze of pain automatically falls upon mind 
                             when dissatisfaction condensed in to sorrow
                                  continuity ignites misunderstanding 
                                drifts to non liquid fire anger’s burrow 

                              after a limit passes by digging inner creek 
                            swells up with fierce heat of the stored anger
                            at that time burns destroys all good thoughts
                               without due care life remains in danger

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Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 5/16/2015 8:26:00 PM Excellent pen BL! I enjoyed reading your very deep nice verses dear friend. A7! Thank you so much for visiting my page and all your kindness. Very deeply appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you!:)D." Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/17/2015 1:23:00 AM Thanks my lovely friend for your support with appreciation. Also for A7. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez Date: 5/16/2015 7:38:00 AM How true, BL. We are all subject to pain, offenses at one time or another. It is how we react to them that determines the final outcome. A 7. Hope you are keeping well. Kim Login to Reply Bl Devnath Date: 5/16/2015 9:51:00 AM not misundings, typo mistake it's below. Misunderstandings it is. My lovely friend,bl Bl Devnath Date: 5/16/2015 9:47:00 AM In our life we often do offences knowingly or unknowingly and for that we get pain, i think. I agree with you, "it is how we react to that determines the final outcome". How pain causes mental restlessness from misundings that leads to anger which destroys all good thoughts. If both take care of each other, such chances can be minimised. Thanks for your support, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl