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Without Address

I probed her pretense. 
Joyfully. 
Her face is attractive. 
Her passion shines through. 
Her elegance and jubilation appeal. 
Her eyes, purity, delight. 
I need precise fiction. 
My poetry will love her. 
She thudded. 
How should I describe her? 
Her face. 
O light-hearted,
 see your devotion
 in the mirror.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Beaufort Avatar
February 23, 2024 at 1:10 PM
We all do love beauty...it's a form of art. It's much harder to see inner beauty. Some do and some have more difficulty. See SP....you got me thinking.
Lamoureux Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 12:10 PM
A passionate first write. A belated welcome to the soup.
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