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I probed her pretense. Joyfully. Her face is attractive. Her passion shines through. Her elegance and jubilation appeal. Her eyes, purity, delight. I need precise fiction. My poetry will love her. She thudded. How should I describe her? Her face. O light-hearted, see your devotion in the mirror.

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Date: 2/23/2024 1:10:00 PM
We all do love beauty...it's a form of art. It's much harder to see inner beauty. Some do and some have more difficulty. See SP....you got me thinking.
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Date: 3/23/2021 12:10:00 PM
A passionate first write. A belated welcome to the soup.
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