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Without

It is love that is so deep, could you imagine, your soul aching, moaning for love. Living your life, searching for that special someone, never to find them. The feeling that you are alone, the sorrow of being without. How much you have done, how much you have loved. When the one your heart desired, was given to us by his father.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/16/2012 3:00:00 PM

Back for a reread of your very first posting...I enjoy reading your poetry as well as reading how others are inspired by it...I especially like Michael's comments below...he reads with depth and his opinions are insightful....I know u agree. I purchased 2 of his books earlier this year...One I kept for myself. The other one I used as a prize for one of my contests...Grand stuff on romance and life! gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/27/2011 2:49:00 PM

In this Piece I see a man searching for answers to questions he may already know.. Love does find its way...Im living proof... Michael

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2011 9:37:00 PM

Lots of longing for love in this one, and the wonders of the Lord!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/5/2011 6:53:00 AM

Good morning, John~ I want to thank you for reading through the last 3 poems of mine and making overly generous comments. I am a newer poet just like you. I love writing about the Lord just like u also.Isn't it funny that our best poetry is when we are either writing about the Lord or about our families? Have a blessed week...I have a challenge for you...I will soup mail it to u..:) Gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2011 10:00:00 PM

Hello, John,, stopping by to say hi... I have opened over 10 poems of yours..lol.. and they all have a comment from me.. I decided to start with this one again..Until i hit one in the future that has not been read by me.. or until you post something new.. take care and good night,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2011 8:26:00 PM

life without... is no life at all.... SOmetimes i wonder if one can really go on without all them desires... i have tried it,,, but, my heart will fall and call... enjoyed,..p.d.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 5/28/2011 4:15:00 AM

you got skills kid! Are you young? I would love to see you LET LOOSE with the pen b/c I think you have a nice spark which could quickly build up a HUGE inferno. DiG Deep and let the words GO! You will go far with this if so. If anything the therapeutic value is priceless. ~JSLambert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 4:57:00 PM

~~~Magnificent~~~ Love and blessings always, Carol

Matt Hunt

Date: 4/20/2011 8:10:00 PM

I'm just like you my brother. I have been searching for that special woman too. I, however, have found that my love of Jesus is so strong. I am hoping and praying that the woman he sends me shares my sentiments. Great job:)

Desiree M

Date: 4/18/2011 4:18:00 AM

Love will find you for sure. fantastic poem

Cory Long

Date: 4/17/2011 1:40:00 PM

you will find true love, but in the mean time continue your poetry Cory

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/17/2011 10:56:00 AM

John, I've been very lucky to find that special person so long ago , who now needs me for everything, and I give it like my love. Your poems remain an inspiration to all who read them. Anne.

Cory Long

Date: 4/16/2011 4:56:00 PM

very nice.. cory