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Foliage and birds pollute the air Flowery infestation everywhere Happy children’s smile with an infectious stare Melodious songs do my tortured ears ensnare Food has no taste, though I don’t care With out you life is a nightmare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 11:02:00 AM
Beautful piece. Glad I took time to read it today.
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Date: 11/10/2010 10:41:00 AM
Amazing Robb, a very picky thought about life, but one can understand the need we have for a certain love. Truly " love it ( Lin~Ra )
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Date: 11/10/2010 9:19:00 AM
Things that others find pleasant and joyful can actually be a disturbance to one who is depressed. You make a good point here, Robb, and as usual your rhyme is outstanding! Love, Carolyn
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