Robb A. Kopp Poet Monorhyme

Without

Foliage and birds pollute the air
Flowery infestation everywhere
Happy children’s smile with an infectious stare
Melodious songs do my tortured ears ensnare
Food has no taste, though I don’t care 
With out you life is a nightmare

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Christi Kopp November 10, 2010 at 11:02 AM Beautful piece. Glad I took time to read it today.

Hathor Ammutlinra November 10, 2010 at 10:41 AM Amazing Robb, a very picky thought about life, but one can understand the need we have for a certain love. Truly " love it ( Lin~Ra )

Carolyn Devonshire November 10, 2010 at 9:19 AM Things that others find pleasant and joyful can actually be a disturbance to one who is depressed. You make a good point here, Robb, and as usual your rhyme is outstanding! Love, Carolyn