Without

Without a whisper you said goodbye Without movement I felt you die. Without a loving mother's breath Without a reason to explain your death. Without a thought my tears began Without a struggle they quickly ran. Without a mother's love I could not cope Without her love and without hope.

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/15/2019 11:39:00 AM

Without doubt, yours is a sad and touching poem, Anna. The loss of someone dear to us is not easy to explain, but you managed that with an able pen. ~ Best regards // paul

Anna Tate
Date: 11/15/2019 1:37:00 PM

Aw thank you so much for your feedback much appreciated x

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/4/2019 3:29:00 PM

Beautifully penned Anna, so sad words bringing home the reality of being without.

Anna Tate
Date: 10/24/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thanks so much

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 8/29/2019 2:04:00 PM

Such sad words.

Anna Tate
Date: 10/24/2019 7:59:00 PM

Thank you