Anna Tate Poet Blank verse

Without

Without a whisper you said goodbye
Without movement I felt you die.
Without a loving mother's breath
Without a reason to explain your death.

Without a thought my tears began
Without a struggle they quickly ran.
Without a mother's love I could not cope
Without her love and without hope.

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Paul Callus November 15, 2019 at 11:39 AM Without doubt, yours is a sad and touching poem, Anna. The loss of someone dear to us is not easy to explain, but you managed that with an able pen. ~ Best regards // paul Anna Tate November 15, 2019 at 1:37 PM Aw thank you so much for your feedback much appreciated x

Gordon Mcconnell September 4, 2019 at 3:29 PM Beautifully penned Anna, so sad words bringing home the reality of being without. Anna Tate October 24, 2019 at 7:59 PM Thanks so much

Elizabeth Kinch August 29, 2019 at 2:04 PM Such sad words. Anna Tate October 24, 2019 at 7:59 PM Thank you