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Within Your Keep Part 2

Children bring such joy but must be minded, bus staff never let them be blind sided, at end of shift do a careful sweep, in every spot well within your keep, an owner has so many legal duties, to watch over Mum and Dad’s beauties

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 4/21/2024 3:40:00 PM

We do have the duty to watch over mom's and dad's beauties! Good job describing a student search on the bus. Congratulations on your win in my contest.

Howard Kerr
Date: 4/21/2024 4:12:00 PM

Miranda, Thanks for reading, evaluating and considering my submission. Your placement of my entry is something I will always cherish. I enjoyed your contest Howard

Ink Empress

Date: 4/9/2024 3:56:00 AM

To watch over mum and dad’s beauties how cute and accurate is this, children must always be protected and taken care of they are so precious! I love how youv written for this prompt and how youv delivered it is powerful and a reminder for all too. Pleasure reading you always, best wishes for the contest

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/8/2024 8:46:00 AM

This poem goes to the heart. Keeping children safe is most important. I like this poem.

Howard Kerr
Date: 4/8/2024 10:00:00 AM

Your comment is much appreciated .I value each and every one of your reflections on my work Howard