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Within You

Within you, in my little universe, I hear your soothing heartbeat, my own life, I just discovered my fingers, floating in the warmth of your womb, as you gently sing to me, I marvel at the purring of the cat, as she's sleepily nestled up to your abdomen, I'm a promise to be- delivered to you from God. ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/18/2024 9:15:00 AM
A winner you are! This was beautiful . Full of imagery and soul. I felt like the unborn soul in this poem ….should have been first place. A human shortage is a danger to all nations. Its far worse than climate change which is a cash cow for leftist globalists.. And a way to control nations by fear. Pangie.xxx I am not afraid to say abortion is an evil
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Regina Elliott
Date: 1/18/2024 9:34:00 AM
You're so generous and sweet, Pangie. I'm so glad you like my prolife poem. Your courage is amazing. Write on. Hugs xxooxxx
Date: 10/23/2023 6:36:00 AM
Regina, this concise, deeply moving poem has brought me to a teary smile! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Regina Elliott
Date: 10/23/2023 4:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. This is so kind of you. Have a blessed evening. ~
Date: 10/23/2023 12:04:00 AM
Hello Regina, I’m absolutely delighted for you. A third placed podium selection with this consistently clever charming creation. PURR-fection itself. Endless rounds of applause Howard kerr
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Regina Elliott
Date: 10/23/2023 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Howard. Your kind support is always greatly appreciated. Miles of smiles to you and yours. ~
Date: 10/18/2023 8:38:00 PM
Sweet, soothing, soulful, Regina. Me-ow, Gershon
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Regina Elliott
Date: 10/23/2023 4:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon. Warmest wishes and regards. ~

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