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Within Walls

Tangled treachery, many endless turns Lost within walls of darkest evergreen, Dead end again, wrong way this time - same ferns! Walls too high, can't climb, end always unseen Losing pace, gasping breath - energy burns Footprints that fit, in moon's silvery sheen Too dark, no escape from overgrown place Morning comes slowly, light hits the same face

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/29/2017 3:17:00 PM
Well written Lorna ! Welcome to poetry soup ! :)
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Date: 8/25/2017 5:52:00 PM
Lorna, it looks like you are new here. You wrote very well here. It reminds me of some dreams I have had when I feel overwhelmed! Welcome to Soup.
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Lorna Caizley
Date: 8/25/2017 8:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks for the welcome. I really enjoyed you're interpretation of my poem. Thank you for the kind comment

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