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Within the Walls

We often look at the person within the walls as the breaker ,
not the broken
the relentless evil that exists in this persons free will 
The horror this person was willing to create
how they bruised societies ego

How then do we look then at the breakers
We look with sad forgiving eyes
We understand why the family is scared to sleep again in there own house
We understand why the victim escapes into opiat related bliss
We understand why they cant go back to yesterdays routine.

When is it that we decide to place the time stamp 
Why must it  begin then
What if we looked at everything
Why do we value one free will above another
Lets move back and see

Let your forgiving eyes relate and empathize
The brain signalling reflex and pain
receptors act as puppet strings that hopes to move one out of harms way
Move from everything that hurts,
some stronger than others 

To isolate a lonely human is only to further the hurt
Hurt very quickly to desperation
Desperation to obedience
Obedience to “conditional acceptance”
Problem Solved
No

Looking head on into your own script is the only way to find your story
Read your story well, don't skip a line
It all comes together, 
what led your brain to release those choices?
If you read my book, 
word for word 
you would get to the same page in the same chapter
your next sentence would be the same
where my choice is simply a result- 
A choice to rid the pain
Remove the fear
Lift the prejudice

Do I run or dare I confront
Do I feast or make love
Is my machine well oiled and assembled for the job
Does the neglect of my maintenace not matter
Is my warranty the 12  decedents of men that choose whether I shall be rebuilt
Or is my justice sitting right here in my book.

Is my forgiveness in my manufacturer
or is forgiveness in the pressure that all my parts are constructed to work a certain way
Am I to be assembled in a way that produces the end product wanted
Then why isn't the best engineer on my case

A lawyer to make decisions the law
a captain to navigate a ship
yet an amateur is sent to rebuild what is broken 
an amateur assembled us in the first place
The answer is to understand the book
The answer is to understand the amateur

My Justice is the past
My Justice is my past
My Justice is your past
My justice
Our Justice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/8/2016 1:38:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE AGAIN... LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 6:52:00 PM
wonderful poem i could feel your words nicely done
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Date: 3/17/2014 4:29:00 PM
Hi Moral, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:17:00 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, morals
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Date: 3/17/2014 2:59:00 AM
Powerful words indeed. "Yet the amateur is sent to fix what is broken" speaks volumes to me personally. I love it. Brian
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Date: 3/13/2014 3:56:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Moral :) - I choose your first very good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1 Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:59:00 AM
I enjoyed this powerful write!!!
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:15:00 AM
Moral, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/12/2014 6:38:00 AM
Well tuned poem. I read these lines: "Looking head on into your own script is the only way to find your story." Powerful, thats the raw truth!
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Date: 3/12/2014 12:25:00 AM
powerful words and thoughts, Moral , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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