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Within the Walls

We often look at the person within the walls as the breaker , not the broken the relentless evil that exists in this persons free will The horror this person was willing to create how they bruised societies ego How then do we look then at the breakers We look with sad forgiving eyes We understand why the family is scared to sleep again in there own house We understand why the victim escapes into opiat related bliss We understand why they cant go back to yesterdays routine. When is it that we decide to place the time stamp Why must it begin then What if we looked at everything Why do we value one free will above another Lets move back and see Let your forgiving eyes relate and empathize The brain signalling reflex and pain receptors act as puppet strings that hopes to move one out of harms way Move from everything that hurts, some stronger than others To isolate a lonely human is only to further the hurt Hurt very quickly to desperation Desperation to obedience Obedience to “conditional acceptance” Problem Solved No Looking head on into your own script is the only way to find your story Read your story well, don't skip a line It all comes together, what led your brain to release those choices? If you read my book, word for word you would get to the same page in the same chapter your next sentence would be the same where my choice is simply a result- A choice to rid the pain Remove the fear Lift the prejudice Do I run or dare I confront Do I feast or make love Is my machine well oiled and assembled for the job Does the neglect of my maintenace not matter Is my warranty the 12 decedents of men that choose whether I shall be rebuilt Or is my justice sitting right here in my book. Is my forgiveness in my manufacturer or is forgiveness in the pressure that all my parts are constructed to work a certain way Am I to be assembled in a way that produces the end product wanted Then why isn't the best engineer on my case A lawyer to make decisions the law a captain to navigate a ship yet an amateur is sent to rebuild what is broken an amateur assembled us in the first place The answer is to understand the book The answer is to understand the amateur My Justice is the past My Justice is my past My Justice is your past My justice Our Justice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/8/2016 1:38:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS ONE AGAIN... LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 6:52:00 PM
wonderful poem i could feel your words nicely done
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Date: 3/17/2014 4:29:00 PM
Hi Moral, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:17:00 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, morals
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Date: 3/17/2014 2:59:00 AM
Powerful words indeed. "Yet the amateur is sent to fix what is broken" speaks volumes to me personally. I love it. Brian
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Date: 3/13/2014 3:56:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Moral :) - I choose your first very good written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1 Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:59:00 AM
I enjoyed this powerful write!!!
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Date: 3/12/2014 9:15:00 AM
Moral, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/12/2014 6:38:00 AM
Well tuned poem. I read these lines: "Looking head on into your own script is the only way to find your story." Powerful, thats the raw truth!
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Date: 3/12/2014 12:25:00 AM
powerful words and thoughts, Moral , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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