Within the Twilight

Within The Twilight (Aquarian) Lonely from time to time within the twilight dim morning followed the light with lustrous sunshine bringing warmth the beauty unfolds for all the souls in the world adored with love. Some hearts with words and deeds never seem to find love yearning for happy dreams of twinkling stars that shine at night with faith and hope and all that is dear to the heart the home of love. Erich J.Goller Copyright 2.11.2010 "Aquarian" form be Ann Marie Mazz four lines 2/4/6/2 syllables---any subject any verse length--rhyming optional Aquarian extension 4/8/12/4 syllables
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Eastman Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Exceptionally well written... Beautiful piece.
Goller Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 3:16 PM
thank you very much carol for your heartfelt words,Hugs!Erich
Merryman Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 10:47 AM
An interesting form. I've never heard of this before. Thanks for sharing, Erich. Love, Kim
Goller Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 12:11 PM
thank you very much Kim,I'm glad you liked the poem and form.Hugs!Erich
Brown Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Magnficent poem your are sharing with us Erich. Thank you. Love, Carol
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