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Within the Stars, Your Beauty Shines

Within the stars, your beauty shines, an eternal light, shining Heavenly bright, a beating heart in a midnight sky, my beacon of love, ever shining. You are the beauty that sings in my heart, a serenade, to give me life, your star does sing, so soft, the pulse of loving light, emitting from your starlight love. Forever, you shine with Heaven’s light, Luna, your sister, touches you with grace, beloved, your light shines in my heart, touching me ever, with Luna’s grace. You are the star with a beloved name, my love, the living star that shines on me, Ever, you shall shine in this starry field, within the stars, your beauty shines. __________________________________________________

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Date: 3/21/2020 11:35:00 AM
Hi Mike, I wondered where you were - so glad to see you back - this romantic write is exquisite, but you are poetically eloquent an talented dear friend ' Within the stars, your beauty shines'. Well penned Mike, Blessings Jennifer.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/21/2020 2:58:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I had to take some time away. I hope that this time I can stay longer, Jennifer. The heart still sings. Have a wonderful saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/20/2020 10:51:00 PM
This poem shines beautifully like a star. Your imagery uplifting and pretty.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/21/2020 9:23:00 AM
Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. As you see, the love is still singing from the heart. The heart still sings as it chooses. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/20/2020 4:36:00 PM
Your poetry is always beautiful no matter how many years go by. Thanks you for sharing dear Vlad.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/20/2020 7:19:00 PM
Hi Pixie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am back again and the heart is still singing love. The heart sings as it chooses Pixie. I am so glad you dropped by. Hugs....Mike. XX

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