Within the Rise

like a redolence
of summer
you linger
in the breeze

i feel the warmth
of your breath
brush against me
beneath memories call
as it falls like leaves
around me

i taste the sapor
of your lips
pressed against mine
as i blush
like crimson skies
in the dawning
of recollection
of thoughts

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/3/2019 7:18:00 AM
How charming are these words reminiscent in sweet recall..enjoyed the poem, Sandy.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/2/2019 7:59:00 PM
Sigh... So romantic, Sandra! :) gw
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 8:52:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, not often my muse gets romantic :) hugs
Date: 9/2/2019 3:46:00 PM
Now there you go, that wasn't so sad, actually it was the opposite. This was warm, inviting and alluring. Yep, I liked this a lot. Beautiful my friend, I could feel the desire forming in this one.
Login to Reply
Adams Avatar
Sandra Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 3:52:00 PM
Thank you....some days you just have to create your own sunshine....still a dismal day here, hoping for a sunset at least :) hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter