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Within the Blue

in your arms, i feel as though the sun will never set, i am the blushed morning rise that doesn't rise alone, i feel you rising as well. sometimes when i am alone i question cloudless days and wonder what if... what if things were colored gray? if my hands were only able to trace shadows rather than the very edges of your soul, would loneliness trigger me in deeper thoughts than you or i could ever imagine? i can't picture my hands empty aging with time, holding nothing but a dream; like wrinkled poems falling to the floor as if never to be read by anyone. my mind alone could trigger my soul, pull my fingers back from reality, press against more than facts then stop my heart from beating as i roll the barrel and draw my last breath of poetry, alone... if things were colored gray

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Date: 11/25/2013 9:41:00 PM
I absolutely love this poem, Sandra! I am adding it to my favorites! Need I say more?...Was this written for the "blue" contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/27/2013 4:15:00 PM
There was a contest with a "blue" theme. SKAT was the sponsor. But, it must have gotten enough entries already!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/26/2013 6:45:00 AM
Wow...Thank you Kelly... no it was not entered in a contest...I am not seeing a blue contest in the current list ... hugs :)
Date: 11/16/2013 11:23:00 AM
a colour for each mood, wow that is worth thinking about,,, just as your poetry is....
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/26/2013 6:41:00 AM
thank you Harry :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 8:18:00 AM
"blushed morning rise"....lovely wondrous line, sandra! and also about tracing the shadow...you spark my imagination and bring it to unspeakable heights! thank you for this lovely piece! i wish you'd find your hand empty no longer soon before Christmas snow falls by your window pane...always, wendy
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Wendy for your kind comment :) hugs
Date: 11/16/2013 12:49:00 AM
Touching poem Sandra! I especially like the thought provoking questions and contemplations - you've executed the theme very well.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/16/2013 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Vicky :)
Date: 11/15/2013 11:02:00 AM
Sandra, normally gray is allergic to gray. I mean dull is allergic to aged ones.Sometimes in life we may see dullness.The only way is fight it out. no excuses to escape. (: ) Jenish.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 10:31:00 PM
thank you Jenish :)
Date: 11/15/2013 9:18:00 AM
This really hit home for me. Deeply heart-wrenching...fantastic job!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/15/2013 9:41:00 AM
thank you Drake....sometimes we question life as is and can't help but to wonder how it would be if if things weren't as good...sometimes change is good...sometimes it's not....hugs :)

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