Within the Blue

in your arms, i feel as though
the sun will never set, 
i am the blushed morning rise
that doesn't rise alone,
i feel you rising as well.

sometimes when i am alone
i question cloudless days
and wonder what if...
what if things were colored gray?

if my hands were only able to trace shadows
rather than the very edges of your soul,
would loneliness trigger me in deeper thoughts
than you or i could ever imagine?

i can't picture my hands empty
aging with time, holding nothing but a dream;
like wrinkled poems falling to the floor
as if never to be read by anyone.

my mind alone could trigger my soul,
pull my fingers back from reality,
press against more than facts
then stop my heart from beating
as i roll the barrel and draw
my last breath of poetry,
alone...
if things were colored gray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 9:41 PM
I absolutely love this poem, Sandra! I am adding it to my favorites! Need I say more?...Was this written for the "blue" contest? If so, I wish you the best of luck!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much!
Deschler Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 4:15 PM
There was a contest with a "blue" theme. SKAT was the sponsor. But, it must have gotten enough entries already!
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:45 AM
Wow...Thank you Kelly... no it was not entered in a contest...I am not seeing a blue contest in the current list ... hugs :)
Horsman Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 11:23 AM
a colour for each mood, wow that is worth thinking about,,, just as your poetry is....
Adams Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:41 AM
thank you Harry :) hugs
Meyer Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 8:18 AM
"blushed morning rise"....lovely wondrous line, sandra! and also about tracing the shadow...you spark my imagination and bring it to unspeakable heights! thank you for this lovely piece! i wish you'd find your hand empty no longer soon before Christmas snow falls by your window pane...always, wendy
Adams Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Wendy for your kind comment :) hugs
Tsiluma Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 12:49 AM
Touching poem Sandra! I especially like the thought provoking questions and contemplations - you've executed the theme very well.
Adams Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Vicky :)
Undertaker Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Sandra, normally gray is allergic to gray. I mean dull is allergic to aged ones.Sometimes in life we may see dullness.The only way is fight it out. no excuses to escape. (: ) Jenish.
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 10:31 PM
thank you Jenish :)
Tacito Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 9:18 AM
This really hit home for me. Deeply heart-wrenching...fantastic job!
Adams Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 9:41 AM
thank you Drake....sometimes we question life as is and can't help but to wonder how it would be if if things weren't as good...sometimes change is good...sometimes it's not....hugs :)
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