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Within Tears

In Temple, Masjid, Church, pagoda........ In Vedas, Quran, Jabur, Tawrat, Injil....... O God I found You and lost Now You are nowhere I'm within orphan tears Loneliness grasps me very For You, I walk to every entity! -29.11.2020 Chattogram

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2020 7:12:00 PM

this is so heartfelt. I really like it.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/29/2020 8:43:00 AM

I can feel your heart when I read your tender sad words dear poet. You are never truly orphaned, even when you think you are alone, you are being protected and loved. Thank you for sharing your sensitive write. Have a blessed day.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2020 5:38:00 AM

Much to gleam from your short poem--I felt the emotive lines: Now You are nowhere--I'm within orphan tears...