Within Sight

Sun refracts through window, raising sight 
See her standing within my gazing sight

Dry timbers lay in a pile awaiting spark
Fire ignites heartfelt joy in blazing sight

Lying on our backs to enjoy each night
Watch evening’s moon, each phasing sight

Noises abound through warm walls of home
Children amassed at play, a crazing sight

A life that could only have been imagined
Started one day with an amazing sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 15, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Adam, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
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November 15, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Thanks Skat ;)
Harper Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 12:52 PM
Lovely ghazal Adam, brings out the relationships in an inviting way, congratulations on your win.
Hapworth Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Thank you. Its been a great relationship to see grow and be a part of for many years now :)
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:04 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your win :)
Hapworth Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Thank you :)
Mehta Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations on the win, Adam
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