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Within Sight

Sun refracts through window, raising sight See her standing within my gazing sight Dry timbers lay in a pile awaiting spark Fire ignites heartfelt joy in blazing sight Lying on our backs to enjoy each night Watch evening’s moon, each phasing sight Noises abound through warm walls of home Children amassed at play, a crazing sight A life that could only have been imagined Started one day with an amazing sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/15/2013 11:12:00 AM
Adam, Congratulations, on your 'Take the Leap' win............ LOVE ~ SKAT ~
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 11/15/2013 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Skat ;)
Date: 11/13/2013 12:52:00 PM
Lovely ghazal Adam, brings out the relationships in an inviting way, congratulations on your win.
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 11/13/2013 1:16:00 PM
Thank you. Its been a great relationship to see grow and be a part of for many years now :)
Date: 11/12/2013 9:04:00 PM
beautifully penned...congrats on your win :)
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Adam Hapworth
Date: 11/13/2013 8:49:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/12/2013 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Adam
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