Within Me You Are

With a heart full of yearning, a beacon of hope,
Galloping through the tapestry of time,
Over dales and peaks, beneath the azure cope,
Scouring the breadth of the earth, so prime.

Bound within the core of my being, thou art,
Lost, now wandering in the realm of thought,
For I have traversed beyond my own heart,
In the quest for the essence, I have sought.

As Keats might muse upon a Grecian urn,
I ponder the silent form I yearn to find,
Through the whispers of the wind, I discern,
Your echoes, in the caverns of my mind.


emm
13/08/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/4/2014 2:24:00 PM
I love this piece Malik. Keep writing and Keep well. "B"
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Date: 10/3/2014 2:54:00 AM
You can search for her,then you search for her within you,beyond your deepest breath,and there She lays-An amazing feeling you created,Awesome.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:57:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and your wise and Kind words....keep visiting,, Stay blessed
Date: 9/30/2014 1:43:00 PM
Wonderful work, Malik. Bound within me, you are gone astray....so deep. Well done my friend.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:43:00 AM
Thanks for your visit Sir, I will keep visiting you and hope you will spare somtime for this fellow poet. Stay blessed
Date: 9/30/2014 5:50:00 AM
Malik never stop writing My Poetry Friend...We would All miss words that magnify Others because You are...I love it and I will favorite this...TY for sharing Your Poetry with Me...
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:56:00 AM
Many many thanks for calling me a "Friend" and for reading and liking my poetry, and for making it a favourite,.. I love to write and the encouragement I collect here makes me to keep going... You are so kind friend... Keep visiting....// Malik
Date: 9/30/2014 5:29:00 AM
powerful piece of writing malik
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 5:31:00 AM
Thanks Friend Liam for your visit...
Date: 9/30/2014 2:55:00 AM
Even so ' you carry her within you! Provoking! Loved the vigor of it dear Malik.
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 3:17:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios for your visit and the valuable comment...
Date: 9/29/2014 4:28:00 PM
Great write, love that last line.
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:05:00 PM
Always you are welcome to my page sir... Thanks for your visit.. Congrats for your Best poems in the list...// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 3:45:00 PM
wow, that ending is so cool. For I have gone past myself.... what a poem!!!
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:03:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for your visit and Congrats for topping the list of best new poems... Stay connected Dear,,, Hugs// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 3:16:00 PM
You say a lot in just a few lines, Malik. You have gone past yourself, but there is hope for she is bound within you. // paul
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:02:00 PM
Thanks Mr. Paul for your visit and for the worthy comment, It is like I ruined my life searching God,but He was within me,now I am not me and cannot hold him.. Keep visiting Sir, as this company is no less than a school... God Bless// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 1:58:00 PM
- Very well written, Malik - I like it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:59:00 PM
Thanks for visiting me Dear Anne, your work is always great.... // Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 1:43:00 PM
LOts of powerful lines here. Keep it up! ^^
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thanks Doris for stopping by and for the nice comment, Welcome to my page... Keep visiting Dear. Bless// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 10:51:00 AM
your3rd and 4th line is a wow!!!! :D
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 10:56:00 PM
Thanks dear Friend Olive for your positive comment, keep in touch... Stay Blessed// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 10:08:00 AM
A sublime poem, soul-searching in metaphor and great abstract poetics wow. So nice to read u again!
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thanks S.Zaynub for your visit and the kind words, Feel glad that you understood me in this write. God bless you Friend// Malik
Date: 9/29/2014 8:53:00 AM
I like that last line "For I have gone past myself"..Sometimes I think that I had done just that..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Sara for stopping by and for reading my poem.. I felt it myself.
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