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Within Me You Are

With a heart full of yearning, a beacon of hope, Galloping through the tapestry of time, Over dales and peaks, beneath the azure cope, Scouring the breadth of the earth, so prime. Bound within the core of my being, thou art, Lost, now wandering in the realm of thought, For I have traversed beyond my own heart, In the quest for the essence, I have sought. As Keats might muse upon a Grecian urn, I ponder the silent form I yearn to find, Through the whispers of the wind, I discern, Your echoes, in the caverns of my mind. emm 13/08/2014

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BE Bailey

Date: 11/4/2014 2:24:00 PM

I love this piece Malik. Keep writing and Keep well. "B"

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/3/2014 2:54:00 AM

You can search for her,then you search for her within you,beyond your deepest breath,and there She lays-An amazing feeling you created,Awesome.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:57:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your wise and Kind words....keep visiting,, Stay blessed

David Brown

Date: 9/30/2014 1:43:00 PM

Wonderful work, Malik. Bound within me, you are gone astray....so deep. Well done my friend.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 10/3/2014 2:43:00 AM

Thanks for your visit Sir, I will keep visiting you and hope you will spare somtime for this fellow poet. Stay blessed

Charlene Wilcox

Date: 9/30/2014 5:50:00 AM

Malik never stop writing My Poetry Friend...We would All miss words that magnify Others because You are...I love it and I will favorite this...TY for sharing Your Poetry with Me...

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 5:56:00 AM

Many many thanks for calling me a "Friend" and for reading and liking my poetry, and for making it a favourite,.. I love to write and the encouragement I collect here makes me to keep going... You are so kind friend... Keep visiting....// Malik

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/30/2014 5:29:00 AM

powerful piece of writing malik

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 5:31:00 AM

Thanks Friend Liam for your visit...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/30/2014 2:55:00 AM

Even so ' you carry her within you! Provoking! Loved the vigor of it dear Malik.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/30/2014 3:17:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios for your visit and the valuable comment...

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/29/2014 4:28:00 PM

Great write, love that last line.

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:05:00 PM

Always you are welcome to my page sir... Thanks for your visit.. Congrats for your Best poems in the list...// Malik

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/29/2014 3:45:00 PM

wow, that ending is so cool. For I have gone past myself.... what a poem!!!

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:03:00 PM

Thanks Andrea for your visit and Congrats for topping the list of best new poems... Stay connected Dear,,, Hugs// Malik

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2014 3:16:00 PM

You say a lot in just a few lines, Malik. You have gone past yourself, but there is hope for she is bound within you. // paul

Ma Yaseen
Date: 9/29/2014 11:02:00 PM

Thanks Mr. Paul for your visit and for the worthy comment, It is like I ruined my life searching God,but He was within me,now I am not me and cannot hold him.. Keep visiting Sir, as this company is no less than a school... God Bless// Malik