Within Me

amazement
      alliterates
          the opaque,
too often
            absent,
yet 
    traces
             remain
to occupy
to exact
to elevate..
a readymade
collage..within
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Krampe Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:26 AM
I enjoy reading your poems, Brian, even though I don't always understand them. This one speaks to me in particular, somehow.
Strand Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 7:27 AM
Yes,thanks Agnes,I like a little enigma flavouring to my endeavours.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace