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Honourable Mention 

Brian Strand's Poetry Contest

Judged: 12th March, 2025

like patient Nature
hens keeping nests pluck the eyes
of hostile creatures

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/16/2025 9:31:00 AM
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Dear Trina, I adore the poetic potency of your haiku. Vivid imagery and emotion flow through heart and imagination. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Your golden pen shines always! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/17/2025 12:28:00 PM
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Hello Susan. I appreciate your kind words of affirmation.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2025 8:30:00 AM
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Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/15/2025 9:11:00 AM
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Thanks, Sara. Your encouragement is appreciated :).
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/13/2025 12:47:00 AM
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interesting contrast. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/13/2025 1:05:00 PM
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Thank you fellow writer:)
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Len Gasun
Date: 3/8/2025 7:18:00 PM
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Powerful haiku my dear poet friend Trina. I enjoyed this. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your writings. Hugs
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 3/8/2025 9:44:00 AM
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I love the emotion and the imagery that this haiku conjures. xomo
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/8/2025 3:00:00 PM
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Thank you, Maureen!
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