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Honourable Mention

Brian Strand's Poetry Contest

Judged: 12th March, 2025

Within Limits

like patient Nature
hens keeping nests pluck the eyes
of hostile creatures

Copyright © Trina Layne | Year Posted 2025

animalearthnatural disastershaiku

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March 16, 2025 at 9:31 AM

Dear Trina, I adore the poetic potency of your haiku. Vivid imagery and emotion flow through heart and imagination. Congratulations for your success in Brian's contest. Your golden pen shines always! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

March 17, 2025 at 12:28 PM

Hello Susan. I appreciate your kind words of affirmation.

March 15, 2025 at 8:30 AM

Congratulations on this one being on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K

March 15, 2025 at 9:11 AM

Thanks, Sara. Your encouragement is appreciated :).

thriveni c mysore

March 13, 2025 at 12:47 AM

interesting contrast. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

March 13, 2025 at 1:05 PM

Thank you fellow writer:)

March 8, 2025 at 7:18 PM

Powerful haiku my dear poet friend Trina. I enjoyed this. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your writings. Hugs

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 8, 2025 at 9:44 AM

I love the emotion and the imagery that this haiku conjures. xomo

March 8, 2025 at 3:00 PM

Thank you, Maureen!

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