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Meme by Mel Leach

Within His Eyes

My body, small and crooked, Twists and turns, can't walk. But walks through life with humour, And grins, haltingly talks. Within his eyes I'm perfect. In him lives love alone. And when we melt together, His eyes do bring me home. *** Honoarable mention in contest: Brief Memories. Sponsored by: FJ Thomas October 9, 2016
November 8: Phrase also needs to be in poem body. Completely missed that, oh boy! Only seeing it now. Ah well, I love my little poem anyway! Good luck judging :)
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Date: 4/15/2017 9:06:00 PM
Be still my beating heart! Beautiful pen Darren :) seven xomo!
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Darren White
Date: 4/16/2017 1:11:00 AM
Aww mo, thank you soooo much :)
Date: 12/17/2016 7:02:00 PM
This one is special to me. <3
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Darren White
Date: 12/17/2016 11:53:00 PM
It is for me too, although it was for a contest, I still love it so much...
Date: 10/11/2016 6:02:00 PM
Oh my gosh is this beautiful, it may be the definition of beautiful, I don't know, but oh my, is it beautiful ... CayCay
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Darren White
Date: 10/11/2016 9:58:00 PM
Thank you CayCay :) I had to smile a bit. He thinks I am beautiful, so yeah, there you go!
Date: 10/9/2016 5:29:00 PM
oh so beautiful and romantic Darren - love the image and Mel's meme - I never knew the term until you joined soup:-) hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/9/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Yeah it's not the utterly egotistical ME ME, but one nice word, meme ;)
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