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Meme by Mel Leach

Within His Eyes
My body, small and crooked,
Twists and turns, can't walk.
But walks through life with humour,
And grins, haltingly talks.
Within his eyes I'm perfect.
In him lives love alone.
And when we melt together,
His eyes do bring me home.
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Honoarable mention in contest: Brief Memories.
Sponsored by: FJ Thomas
October 9, 2016
November 8: Phrase also needs to be in poem body.
Completely missed that, oh boy! Only seeing it now.
Ah well, I love my little poem anyway! Good luck judging :)
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