Darren White Poet Free verse

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Meme by Mel Leach

Within His Eyes

My body, small and crooked,
Twists and turns, can't walk.
But walks through life with humour,
And grins, haltingly talks.
Within his eyes I'm perfect.
In him lives love alone.
And when we melt together,
His eyes do bring me home.

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 Honoarable mention in contest: Brief Memories.
Sponsored by: FJ Thomas
October 9, 2016  


November 8: Phrase also needs to be in poem body.
Completely missed that, oh boy! Only seeing it now.
Ah well, I love my little poem anyway! Good luck judging :)

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart April 15, 2017 at 9:06 PM Be still my beating heart! Beautiful pen Darren :) seven xomo! Darren White April 16, 2017 at 1:11 AM Aww mo, thank you soooo much :)

Jason Williams December 17, 2016 at 7:02 PM This one is special to me. <3 Darren White December 17, 2016 at 11:53 PM It is for me too, although it was for a contest, I still love it so much...

CayCay Godwin October 11, 2016 at 6:02 PM Oh my gosh is this beautiful, it may be the definition of beautiful, I don't know, but oh my, is it beautiful ... CayCay Darren White October 11, 2016 at 9:58 PM Thank you CayCay :) I had to smile a bit. He thinks I am beautiful, so yeah, there you go!

Jan Allison October 9, 2016 at 5:29 PM oh so beautiful and romantic Darren - love the image and Mel's meme - I never knew the term until you joined soup:-) hugs jan xx Darren White October 9, 2016 at 9:08 PM Thank you Jan. Yeah it's not the utterly egotistical ME ME, but one nice word, meme ;)