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Stand within the wings of a butterfly and dare to touch the sun. Peer deeply at a simple raindrop, to hear mighty rivers run. Hold ancient worlds on your fingertip, within a single grain of sand. Step into sun cast, prism colors, to race a rainbows span. See the fabric of time and space combine in a delicate spider's web. Within the drop of blood from a thorn, feel the pull of life as it ebbs.
Placement: 1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/11/2011 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing 1st in Brian's contest Paula. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:29:00 PM
The taste of victory so sweet..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/10/2011 3:12:00 PM
A fav!!!
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Date: 10/10/2011 2:32:00 PM
Lovely read and deservedy top billings congrats ans blessings from Paul.
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Date: 10/10/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congrats Paula on a wonderful well deserved win with Within my friend..luv..
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Date: 10/10/2011 9:31:00 AM
Just lovely, to the point a positive write [perhaps rainbow's span?] Congrad's on this win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/30/2011 2:11:00 PM
Interesting write. Reminds me of some of William Blake's work.
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:30:00 PM
wonderfully writen. i've traveled in space with you and saw the beauty of creation. john h loving iii
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