Withheld and Released, Love's Greatest Treasures
Withheld And Released, Love's Greatest Treasures
I- (The Start)
Behold
Resplendent vigor,
Dancing upon rainbows
Drinking sweet red wine
Hold her in sweet embrace,
whisper, darling you look so fine
Await that moment you know will come
That softest kiss, sent to find just you
A memory gifted as a very great treasure
Painting etched into clear mind's eagle eye
Remind yourself she is treasured gift
Promise never to say goodbye
Hold that blessed moment
Snapshot in time
Resplendent vigor,
Released.
II (The Answer)
Release
Love's power,
Bliss so profound
Like cool Spring shower
True love's heart and journey,
Promising an eternity in your arms
No treasure can this blessing ever compare
Fantastic depths of love, two lovers may share.
Life rewarded true love's, heart and faithful soul
With hope, joy and deep romantic splendor
Paradise found within each heart's embrace
Jubilant kisses, so softly planted
Mornings, face to face
In love's embrace
United two
Joined.
Robert J. Lindley, 08-14 -2015 (Part I)
Robert J. Lindley, 1-26-2017 (Part II)
Note: Part I
Verses word count, Ascending order 1,2,3,4,5 6,7,8
Descending order- 8,7,6,5,4,3, 2,1
Note: Part II
Verses word count, Ascending order 1,2,3,4,5 6,7,8
Descending order- 8,7,6,5,4,3, 2,1
Note:
Not sure of the form (maybe new?), a poet showed me this with her fine poem.
Copyright © Robert Lindley | Year Posted 2017
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