Withering Rose

dewdrops---
the withering rose sheds
another petal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2012 at 10:33 AM
A well deserved win for you in the #193 contest. Congratulations Kash. Love, Carol
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August 5, 2012 at 11:24 AM
Beautiful, Kash...so much said in three lines. Congrats on your win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Collins Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Kash lovely watercolor. It also reminds me of tears shed by an elder as friends pass on. Beautiful. love, Kathy
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 7:27 PM
Oh, so I see you had done this for Brian's contest. BIG congrats because you did very well in his contest with this gem, Kash!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 8:18 AM
Congratulations Kash xx
Gooden Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Congrats kash poet.
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:47 PM
I can see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and giving congrats..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:31 PM
i want more, kashi.. you there??:) huggs!
Squyres Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 10:05 AM
I like this haiku very much. Congrats on your winning spot in Brians contest.
Gorelick Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Good going Kash..pretty picture...congrats. BG
Brown Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#193" contest Kash. Love, Carol
May Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 5:27 AM
congrats on your win Kash
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:49 PM
A pleasure to read your poetry this evening Kash. I am happy I was able to read some poetry tonight and so glad yours was among the poems I am reading. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 4:53 PM
AHHHHH, yes, this is a beauty!!! I planted rose bushes this year. They are still rather small but I love how thy keep growing flowers even after a flower dies!!
Sivey Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 2:22 PM
What an image you painted for me my friend! I just love the scene with the enlightening dewdrops sending it's love to the petal as it descends! Beautiful poem Kash, Great Work!!
Neels Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 1:25 PM
vivid image Kash :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 9:53 AM
you make me sigh, kashi.... greeat 'ku!.:)huggs!
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:52 AM
Not nice....but, beautiful kash !!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 1:38 AM
Morning Kash, another excellent haiku, very nice indeed...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 1:05 AM
Nice Haiku xx
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