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withering leaf

   cascades on its thin ribs...

      draped by pearled mist


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~modern haiku~
SKAT's Picture Perfect Haiku #2
6/23/2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/14/2015 3:25:00 PM

A beautiful out look caught with refreshing thought. 7 indeed. Loved always my lovely friend.bl

David Mohn

Date: 6/28/2015 10:51:00 PM

Such a beautiful essence captured…congrats on creating this wonderful piece of art

Kash Poet

Date: 6/26/2015 2:06:00 PM

Beautiful haiku :)

Paul Callus

Date: 6/26/2015 8:03:00 AM

Top marks for a most creative haiku, Nette. Those thin ribs remind me of the kids in poor countries. Congrats on yet another win. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:37:00 PM

Congrats for your win, Nette. I will be in KY tomorrow. gotta hurry and pack. Hope to be online next week. Luv, Andrea

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 8:57:00 AM

So good to read this one again, congratulations!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/25/2015 4:58:00 AM

congrats on placing Nette hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:28:00 AM

Nette... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/24/2015 3:16:00 AM

Nette, am here still yes.. how are you? Mmmn beautiful as ever!!galing!~Olive Eloisa

Tim Smith

Date: 6/23/2015 5:06:00 PM

the mist surrounds the withering leaf...lovely

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2015 4:03:00 PM

such interesting way of seeing it.as thin ribs!! always so creative, Nette.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/22/2015 9:10:00 PM

You are a natural beauty!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/22/2015 8:22:00 PM

good luck, pic goes good with the words! Light & Love

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/22/2015 7:16:00 PM

Innovative way of describing the image. A 7 and a fav! Pic Perfect! :-) huggs

Emile Pinet

Date: 6/22/2015 5:43:00 PM

Like a moth to a flame you seduce us with the beauty of you words and we fall prey to their magic. Emile.

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/22/2015 3:23:00 PM

Hello Nette!! "Withering Leaf" here is a most perfect Haiku write. I wish you all the "7" from me!! Best Always, Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2015 3:22:00 PM

Very descriptive work..I enjoy looking at dew drops or raindrops..Thanks for dropping by..The banana nut bread was in the oven before the fly appeared..Oh!! We enjoyed the bread..My blood glucose had dropped to 70 so I had to eat a slice while it was hot hoping that it was going to bring my sugar back up...I had reached the feeling that I was going to pass out..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 6/22/2015 2:44:00 PM

picture perfect haiku indeed Nette - good luck in the contest this is delightful:-) hugs Jan xx 7

Laura Leiser

Date: 6/22/2015 2:43:00 PM

Imaginative haiku, Nette! I loved it :)

Rhoma Em

Date: 6/22/2015 2:39:00 PM

I like the descriptive images you have painted with softened strokes -But the best was the final 'twist!

Rhoma Em
Date: 6/22/2015 2:39:00 PM

A 7!

Leon Datu

Date: 6/22/2015 2:31:00 PM

Withered leaf on pearled mist.Eloquent haiku blending the beauty and passing of a season! May I Thank you for giving me the chance to place in your contest!

Constance La France

Date: 6/22/2015 2:29:00 PM

Nette, this is so beautifully penned , a wondrous 7 and thanks for my win

Diane Christian

Date: 6/22/2015 2:10:00 PM

Lovely poem, sounds cool I love autumn the leaves so crunchy and colourful, you have talent to write in all forms of poetry, mine is simple, but I like my child like faith, Thank you for your kind comments on my poem if you were the only one, I have also written it as lyrics, worded slightly different and put it on you tube, People are viewing so God is at work globally reaching out to others, I was so blessed when I got the message if I was the only one, he still would of came for me,