Withered

On
the verge
of heaven-
'ere the petals
bloom


Tribute to Michael Bruce and William Soutar

See my blog today for background
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 6:05 PM
Brian, only you can write them like these. Truly poetic. Thanks for remembering me. Your comments are very dear to me. Thank you, Gerard.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 9:04 PM
Such lovely words of this Lanterne poem.. your pen is quite creative these days especially... your blog was very interesting and informative... luv the title too.. blessings.... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 3:30 PM
Interesting write. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Townsend Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 11:02 AM
You are going to have to teach me how to do that. How is it, Sir Brian, that you pack so much soul and beauty into so few words? (A mystery unsolved but truly admired by me)~ A beautiful tribute~ Smiles from Lolita
George   Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Beautiful tribute and so-in-keeping with their history. Profound and astonishing writing in this piece, Brian. To my favourites. Lainie
Sheart Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 8:33 AM
So beautiful Brian.Loved your blog today! Love Light Patricia
Richards Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 8:27 AM
Just beautiful! Enough said!! ~ Love Carrie
Culverhouse Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 5:13 AM
nicely penned,
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