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With Your Love

subjugate me captivate me titillate me with your quiet sighs. ignite me excite me unmake me with your sapphire eyes. see me please me take me tease me with your fingers trace. touch me keep me crave me reap me with your love replace my grief with elation my sin with salvation my loss with creation until the end of time.

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Date: 12/30/2020 1:28:00 PM
this is a beautiful FIRST post at Soup. I especially liked the unique line "unmake me"
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/31/2020 7:02:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea!
Date: 12/24/2020 12:41:00 PM
I love this one :) "With your love replace" So very good.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/24/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and for reading one of my poems.

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