With Your Love

subjugate me
captivate me
titillate me
with your
quiet sighs.

ignite me
excite me
unmake me
with your
sapphire eyes.

see me
please me
take me
tease me
with your
fingers trace.

touch me
keep me
crave me
reap me
with your
love replace

my grief
with elation
my sin
with salvation
my loss
with creation

until
the end
of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 1:28 PM
this is a beautiful FIRST post at Soup. I especially liked the unique line "unmake me"
Levasseur Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:02 AM
Thank you so much Andrea!
Jones Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 12:41 PM
I love this one :) "With your love replace" So very good.
Levasseur Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 12:42 PM
Thank you very much for your kind thoughts and for reading one of my poems.
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