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With You I Confide

Rays of warm sunshine spread a blanket through Colorful leaves that are waving goodbye In the nip of cold air that says its true Still playfully bouncing under blue sky Trees give into winter’s arrival soon But through bare branches, new scenes will emerge Bringing beauty and warmth with a new tune Shadows will dance on white tops of snow surge As I dance with you, in sunshine of fall To a melody of seasonal grace I truly do listen and hear the call As I watch this creation change its face Step by step, across the new stage outside All the while knowing, with you I confide 10/24/19 Entry for New Falls Sonnet Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 11/8/2019 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful Heidi. Your love of nature is evident. Nice rhythm. Good luck.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2019 9:50:00 AM
Thank you very much Sandy :) I appreciate your comments on my poetry.
Date: 10/25/2019 12:51:00 AM
Beautiful, Heidi ~ embracing each season as it was meant to be <3
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/25/2019 9:17:00 AM
Thank you HT. Have a nice day :)
Date: 10/24/2019 7:36:00 PM
beautifully penned...i enjoyed this one, best wishes in the contest :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. It is nice to hear you enjoyed this :)
Date: 10/24/2019 2:21:00 PM
I liked the rhythmic tone..happy imagery makes the poem..great ending, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thank you for the kind feedback Vijay. I am happy you like this one :)
Date: 10/24/2019 12:55:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful Heidi and so full of life and color. You bring nature into our worlds through your wonderful poetry. Best wishes in the contest my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. Your comment has made my day along with this warm sunshine here :)

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