With You

When I think of where my life is going And where my life has been The most precious days in all my life Have been spent with my Best Friend If my time on earth were to end tonight I’d die with one sure truth If I had to do it all again I’d do it all with you © 2001, R. Erin Lenth

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Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/8/2011 6:59:00 AM

Very nice poem to your friend...Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/8/2011 6:06:00 AM

Nice sentimental and passionate verses, Erin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/8/2011 5:54:00 AM

I have stopped by to read your excellent poetry today Erin. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love, Carol

Jl Sadberry

Date: 4/7/2011 11:33:00 AM

Smile, *^_^* The sweetest of pure made love I believe, my dear. = Tis but a very well composed verse; flowing as a melodic symphony; choired from the deepest of ones precious and beautiful heart. == And, for some reason as its lovely notes played their keys in sweet, I envisioned All of Life, standing afore my eyes ~ "Chimes of 'Love.'" === love always, jasper

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 4/7/2011 9:23:00 AM

simply beautiful(: