With Time

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He slumps dejectedly today Unlike he walked in his youth It’s like he sees the ground As his most intimate truth I yearn to tell him things Like my love for him is alive Willing him to live longer And find purpose in his time I want him to know that He means the world to me The pain he feels today Is something I wish I could free I hope he can find it inside The strength to get through Today, tomorrow, next week Through years of anguish I want him to know I will give Pieces of my heart and soul To make him feel a bit better More like staying, going on I reach out to embrace him My touch is filled with gentleness He takes my hand in his own And together we continue on Will he be here tomorrow? My heart surely hopes so But how can I truly understand How it feels to grow old Without experiencing it myself? With time… I will learn to accept And, perhaps, feel as he has felt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/22/2019 1:18:00 PM
This is a brilliant personal and emotive poem, that shows angst.... love the journey this took me on...
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Date: 9/22/2019 12:56:00 PM
You're right about never knowing how it feels until you feel that pain. But your tender understanding just the right thing to comfort one who is in pain... And hopefully, you yourself will never have to experience it yourself. Nicely expressed, Regina! ~ From one who is in constant pain, gw
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