With Tears That Fall

“You may say that I’m a dreamer”,
With such presumption in my youth
Beyond school age, yet hardly saged
I hoped to use my wits to change the world…
I dreamed I would…I dreamed I could…

I declared to fight, what seemed so right
With eager zeal, I leaned so hard against the wind
The breeze just caught my spouted words
And tossed them where it would

I feared my crystal world would splinter
Would shatter without my spin... 
"Never knowing who to cling to, 
                     when the rain set in”

But that was then…
So naively in my eagerness
I hoped to see a world at peace
Hoping my dreams would come alive
From thoughts I shaped on winsome days
Imagining, ….if you please  …"It doesn't have to be that way!"
But now with logic’s eyes, I do recall, and tears well up....and fall
                                                                   my tears well up ....and fall....

How changeless is a planet
Glimmering in search of answers
And still not wringing answers from the slightest sound
And words I held, with vigorous shape 
And hopes expressed, my look for guidance…
Are uttered now, by younger voices…
“I’m dreamin’ again, like I’ve always done, and way down low, I know”…

                                                                  my tears well up.....and fall.....

“My words like silent raindrops fell, 
                    and echoed in the wells of silence”

                                                                  my tears well up......and fall.....

                                                                      ~


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Inspired by Tracie's Contest: "Sing A Song"
Lyrics From  John Lenno--“Imagine”
                    Elton John--“Candle in the Wind”
                    Jim Croce--“It Doesn’t Have To Be That Way”
                    Norah Jones--“The Prettiest Thing”
                    Simon and Garfunkle-- “Sound of Silence”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 24, 2011 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "sing a song for me" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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October 15, 2011 at 6:26 PM
Congrats Carrie on a fabulous win with great song choices for this cool contest...excellent luv..
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October 7, 2011 at 9:58 AM
Passsionate write! Cindy aka Lucinda P.S. haven't read you in awhile.
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October 3, 2011 at 6:46 AM
Good luck in the contest..I will have to check it out..Reads like you have a winner here..Thanks for stopping by..Soup Mail soon...Sara
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October 1, 2011 at 6:28 PM
this was very good. good luck in the contest with this gem.. Free spirit
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