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With Strong Heart

Tiny tear drops Dig deep holes in strong hearts. Its like a horror movie that can’t be, as belly content oozes, makes mine vibrates with fear. Blood gushes out from neck vein cut by glass, The atmosphere filled with cries of sorrow, Doubt ,if this being can live till tomorrow, Smashed and broken limbs in another class. Decapitated! Sudden head off...from body, What a gory site ! Bleeding tears flow down my cheeks As I watch this with strong heart . DATE:8-31-2016 CONTEST :Challenge-write one by Broken Wing.

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Date: 9/16/2016 1:15:00 PM
Olusegun, this poem sounds as if it could be about mid-eastern beheading and is quite gruesome or about a vampire. Always keep them guessing, well done.
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Date: 9/10/2016 11:40:00 PM
Such a vivid description of sorrow and sufferings...Congrats Sunita
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Date: 9/9/2016 10:43:00 AM
Olusegun, congratulations on your win in my contest with this scary write ~
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Date: 9/9/2016 10:19:00 AM
How chillingly expressive this is, Olusegun!! Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
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Date: 9/9/2016 10:03:00 AM
Hope its not from real experience!
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Date: 9/9/2016 9:06:00 AM
Wow, i do hope this wasnt a real experience for you, very vivid picture this presents, congrats too, warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 9/9/2016 7:35:00 AM
so dark and deep, congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
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