Raul Moreno Poet Choka

With Sand, Sea, and Sky

Picturesque displays
Nature’s natural slideshow,
Paintings in motion.
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Paintings in motion
That end with pastel sunsets,
Kaleidoscope views.
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Kaleidoscope views
Nature’s study’s and subjects,
With sand, sea, and sky.

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Abe Lopez April 18, 2009 at 12:18 PM Tranquility as its best, nice job with your chokas.

Tyler Davis April 17, 2009 at 11:52 PM Nice title, you are great with these forms

Charlene Bird April 17, 2009 at 9:54 AM you have captured a beautiful view of nature and what it brings to life. great work!

Carolyn Devonshire April 14, 2009 at 6:48 PM Nature provides much inspiration, Raul, and you capture its beauty so well in this poem. Love the way you describe "Paintings in motion," as nature is always growing, always moving. Excellent work! Love, Carolyn

April 11, 2009 at 4:33 PM Beautiful use of imagery for a wonderful poem. Enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Happy Easter! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 9, 2009 at 6:24 PM This one is wonderful, too.

Aleera De La Keur April 9, 2009 at 1:57 AM You paint such an obvious picture with your words and I think you have such a special talent. You are going places Raul, and I hope you stay in touch, Love Aleera

Maryam Jameela Haniff April 8, 2009 at 4:46 PM wow! this absolutely fabulous Raul....really really beautiful....this is truly an amazing poem....I loved it!....great job.....always Maryam*

John Weber April 8, 2009 at 12:31 PM Fascinating progression of thoughts and images here, Raul, on par with your usual exceptional output! You paint with bold brushstrokes, my friend! Warm regards, John.

Brian Strand April 8, 2009 at 7:38 AM Very beautiful Raul.Will also look forward to your musical words.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words

Sharon Winter April 8, 2009 at 6:36 AM I feel like you must live by the sea and are constantly inspired (who wouldn't be!). If not, your love for it is evident by these amazing poems. Another awesome write. Love, Shar

Arany P. April 8, 2009 at 5:10 AM wonderful choka ... the outlook is brilliant! ~ Arany

Frank F. Atanacio April 8, 2009 at 4:54 AM there is a painting hidden in these words well penned

James Marshall Goff April 8, 2009 at 4:07 AM amazing choka, Raul, Jim

Emily Kroeger April 7, 2009 at 11:17 PM Wow this is awesome... I like it