With Roses In My Hand

Like the moon brightens the murky night, You have brightened my life in ways that no one ever could. In the windy winter days, In the smoky December nights, In the early morning and dusky afternoon, With grasses soft and green, With dew on the petals of every rose, I wish to be with you With my newborn heart in you. The spaces between your fingers are meant to be filled with mine, Your open arm is meant to be hugged by me. I dream of you and me forever It’s an irrevocable promise. In the July rain, I’d be with you under the same umbrella dancing with every splash of the rain. And when you feel cold I’d light the fire for you. In the Marigold field with cuckoo’s song and butterfly’s dance We would dance till sunset. And if the whole world collides We would outlast and outlive all. And amidst the storm I will be waiting for you With roses in my hand.
(in the name of "Anjuli" from "Kiran")
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dua Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 3:37 AM
Congrats on your deserving win !! :)))))
Bantawa Avatar
December 2, 2013 at 6:04 PM
thanx!
Bellen Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 12:51 AM
so touching..love it Kiran, Congrats on the win and thanks for visiting mine >>charmane
Bantawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:29 AM
thank you very much.
Loveless Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 10:54 PM
Beautiful sweet write. I've said much the same to my love before :)
Bantawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:30 AM
thanks :-) :-)
Deschler Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:14 PM
So beautiful and romantic! A very heartfelt write! Wonderful work, Kiran!...Thanks for the great comments, once again!
Bantawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:31 AM
you are welcome, thanks for visiting!
Hendricks Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Beautiful and romantic, my friend. I like, I like, I like!!! Licia :-)
Bantawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:31 AM
I also like it, thank you!
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Wow congrats on a marvelous poem n win, written beautifuly romantic.:)
Bantawa Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:31 AM
thank you very much.
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:35 AM
congrats to me! hahaha.. a very dear poem . thanks for the placement Linda.
Sirak Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:33 AM
Beautiful! Simply beautiful! Stunning images. Thank you for visiting my poetry and your kind comments that led me here.
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:35 AM
thank you.
Guzzi Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Very nice fresh metaphors [smoky December nights] [Marigold fields!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM
thank you very much.
Ligon Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 12:43 PM
How romantic, Kiran. Congrats!
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM
thanks for liking.
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 9:42 PM
Hi Kiran, . Congratulations, thank you for the lovely entry. Goodnight. Luv~LINDA
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:51 AM
thanks for considering my poem and placing 3rd in your contest.
Andresen Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 8:32 AM
- A beautiful poem Kiran !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:51 AM
thank you Anne.
Fraser Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 11:59 PM
This is just a perfect picture of love in motion, blessings Carl
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 6:51 AM
thank you Carl.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:18 AM
This is an exceptional piece. Romance distilled.
Bantawa Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 7:39 AM
thanks Richard!
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:45 AM
I'm grateful to you.
A   Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Oh! my this is of pure beauty... the imagery's beyond stunning... like the dusky afternoon look....xox..Linda
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:44 AM
wow.. thanks Linda.
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 12:04 AM
thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 4:32 PM
You are such a romantic. Wonderful!!
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 12:07 AM
Hehehe :-)
Dey Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 12:15 PM
Full of romance and i love the dance of butterfly o the eve...Enjoyed it
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:43 AM
thanks for liking Litan.
May Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 11:04 AM
beautiful poem Kiran...best wishes
Bantawa Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 8:43 AM
thanks Joseph.
Gasun Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 8:51 AM
Wow! So sweet, lovely and romantic poem you've penned here my dear friend Kiran. You're a great love poet too. Kudos to you on this great work! I love it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing and your congratulatory comments on my poem. Have a great day! So happy & honored to be the first to comment on your poem. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Bantawa Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 9:44 AM
thank you so much Leonora.
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