Nette Onclaud Poet Diminished Hexaverse

With Raw Finesse

As riverbank swivels
on deepened water floor
with ripples of fine air
its movement quivering… 
like tidal sways, the route
a junction, long mile.

Finding restfulness
that cuddles heaved turns
to soak every wend
moist with finesse… she
glides in rhapsody.

Sea gracing hours
across bright lune,
her flesh of tones
imbues quiet.

Then to grant
nature's flow
sacred psalms

Gentle… 
through soft

dips

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by nette onclaud
especially for David William's True Diminishing Hexaverse

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2012 at 8:22 AM Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 22, 2012 at 6:39 PM Congratulations on your winning spot nette a very sensuous write ss

Sara Kendrick June 22, 2012 at 3:37 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2012 at 11:33 AM Nette~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,

David Williams June 22, 2012 at 11:06 AM Nette, great imagery you portrayed, I could almost hear the waves, thanks for entering and well done..David

Andrea Dietrich June 22, 2012 at 7:59 AM Love the allusion to Goddess of the sea and imagery of night, nette. Congrats on your win.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 22, 2012 at 2:51 AM Congrats, nette,on the win, love this fine write..:) Jag

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 13, 2012 at 1:41 AM With striking images this makes for an awesome read..thnx for the comments, hugs, ..:) Jag

Jack Horne June 12, 2012 at 1:07 PM just love this beauty, Nette

Pace Ink-U-Script June 12, 2012 at 12:17 PM Beautifully written Nette..love this piece!!

Kash Poet June 12, 2012 at 11:42 AM Wow!!This is amazing Nette.Best wishes to you.

Sara Kendrick June 12, 2012 at 11:10 AM Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.I do enjoy a trip to the ocean front just to enjoy the sights and sounds of the water and surroundings..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I was inspired by the morning and by a song that is in the group of new songs we are learning to sing on the Sunday around the fourth of July..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2012 at 11:00 AM A new gold pearl from your hands Nette, beautiful written - Love it, thank you. - oxox huggggs Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey June 12, 2012 at 10:53 AM Wow, Nette, you have created another masterpiece! What a fabulous and ingenious write! I love the sea and you have brought life and breath into each wave! Bring on the rhapsody my friend! Wonderful write! Great Work!!