With Raw Finesse

As riverbank swivels on deepened water floor with ripples of fine air its movement quivering… like tidal sways, the route a junction, long mile. Finding restfulness that cuddles heaved turns to soak every wend moist with finesse… she glides in rhapsody. Sea gracing hours across bright lune, her flesh of tones imbues quiet. Then to grant nature's flow sacred psalms Gentle… through soft dips
© by nette onclaud especially for David William's True Diminishing Hexaverse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/23/2012 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2012 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot nette a very sensuous write ss
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Date: 6/22/2012 3:37:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:33:00 AM
Nette~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,
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Date: 6/22/2012 11:06:00 AM
Nette, great imagery you portrayed, I could almost hear the waves, thanks for entering and well done..David
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:59:00 AM
Love the allusion to Goddess of the sea and imagery of night, nette. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/22/2012 2:51:00 AM
Congrats, nette,on the win, love this fine write..:) Jag
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Date: 6/13/2012 1:41:00 AM
With striking images this makes for an awesome read..thnx for the comments, hugs, ..:) Jag
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Date: 6/12/2012 1:07:00 PM
just love this beauty, Nette
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Date: 6/12/2012 12:17:00 PM
Beautifully written Nette..love this piece!!
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:42:00 AM
Wow!!This is amazing Nette.Best wishes to you.
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:10:00 AM
Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.I do enjoy a trip to the ocean front just to enjoy the sights and sounds of the water and surroundings..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I was inspired by the morning and by a song that is in the group of new songs we are learning to sing on the Sunday around the fourth of July..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2012 11:00:00 AM
A new gold pearl from your hands Nette, beautiful written - Love it, thank you. - oxox huggggs Anne-Lise
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Date: 6/12/2012 10:53:00 AM
Wow, Nette, you have created another masterpiece! What a fabulous and ingenious write! I love the sea and you have brought life and breath into each wave! Bring on the rhapsody my friend! Wonderful write! Great Work!!
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