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With Raw Finesse

As riverbank swivels on deepened water floor with ripples of fine air its movement quivering… like tidal sways, the route a junction, long mile. Finding restfulness that cuddles heaved turns to soak every wend moist with finesse… she glides in rhapsody. Sea gracing hours across bright lune, her flesh of tones imbues quiet. Then to grant nature's flow sacred psalms Gentle… through soft dips © by nette onclaud especially for David William's True Diminishing Hexaverse

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/23/2012 8:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/22/2012 6:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot nette a very sensuous write ss

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/22/2012 3:37:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/22/2012 11:33:00 AM

Nette~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,

David Williams

Date: 6/22/2012 11:06:00 AM

Nette, great imagery you portrayed, I could almost hear the waves, thanks for entering and well done..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2012 7:59:00 AM

Love the allusion to Goddess of the sea and imagery of night, nette. Congrats on your win.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/22/2012 2:51:00 AM

Congrats, nette,on the win, love this fine write..:) Jag

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/13/2012 1:41:00 AM

With striking images this makes for an awesome read..thnx for the comments, hugs, ..:) Jag

Jack Horne

Date: 6/12/2012 1:07:00 PM

just love this beauty, Nette

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/12/2012 12:17:00 PM

Beautifully written Nette..love this piece!!

Kash Poet

Date: 6/12/2012 11:42:00 AM

Wow!!This is amazing Nette.Best wishes to you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2012 11:10:00 AM

Very expressive and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon.I do enjoy a trip to the ocean front just to enjoy the sights and sounds of the water and surroundings..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I was inspired by the morning and by a song that is in the group of new songs we are learning to sing on the Sunday around the fourth of July..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2012 11:00:00 AM

A new gold pearl from your hands Nette, beautiful written - Love it, thank you. - oxox huggggs Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/12/2012 10:53:00 AM

Wow, Nette, you have created another masterpiece! What a fabulous and ingenious write! I love the sea and you have brought life and breath into each wave! Bring on the rhapsody my friend! Wonderful write! Great Work!!