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With Or Without You

My heart It awakens with each sound of your breath With each word that travels to my ears It beats not, though, in your presence As the want for you seems an unbearable death A pause in the continuance of living Whereby I am not alive with or without you I am but one who wishes to have you Your breath upon my skin, your eyes To open and close again with the vision of My heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/30/2008 1:33:00 AM
glad your are back amongst us again Michael.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/29/2008 8:54:00 PM
Michael one word, enthralled, great write, thanks for you welcomed comments, take care, D-nyce
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Date: 12/29/2008 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful Poetry Michael - I'm glad to see you have returned - God Bless my friend, MJ
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Date: 12/29/2008 7:39:00 AM
This is so romantic and beautiful, your love is so passionate I can feel it through this, awesome write. Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:53:00 AM
The romantic side is showing this morning, and who could resist such a beautiful expression of love!! Someone would melt at the first few words! Well done, Michael! Good wishes in 2009!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/29/2008 6:25:00 AM
Well, you are such a romantic! Your words must delight that wife of yours to no end! P.S-I'm so sorry about your friend (bi-polar) they say my young son is bi-polar, he also has sever adhd, so he has a hard time of it, he worries me all the time. :( I think my mother may have also been, so it's hard for us, but mostly for him. God bless.
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