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With My Eyes

~WITH MY EYES~ What do you see? A wife? A mother? A mistress - or maybe a lover? What is it about her that makes her attractive – sexy even? Is it her eyes, or the way she smiles? Is it the way she walks, or the way she talks - even the way she dresses? Maybe it’s the way the wind teases the rise and fall of her hair as she walks, or the sound of her voice even - soft as birdsong with the sting of summer lightning. Is it the curve of her breasts or the sway of her hips – the sweet smell that lingers in the air or the skip in your heart as she brushes by you, even when her passing is all but a memory? Could it be the empathy she shows to others, or the sorrow she hides from the world - a world that makes sense with her inclusion, bringing emptiness with her absence. Is it the love of the children? Unhampered by the filters of time and cynicism they see only the universal mother. The kindness and love. The forgiveness and understanding. What do you see? I see all of the above – I see my wife.

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Date: 3/2/2018 1:08:00 PM
Hi Dimpra , great write full of love and beautiful twist in the end ::))) hugs from Ireland Niall ::)))) hugs
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 3/2/2018 1:54:00 PM
Thank you Niall. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 2/6/2018 1:30:00 PM
Lovely heartfelt poem, Dimpra. Look forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/6/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/5/2018 9:12:00 AM
Love it! Beautiful
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 2/6/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Audley
Date: 1/27/2018 9:17:00 AM
Dimpra, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/21/2018 3:20:00 PM
With a talent such as you possess, you should have been a member of Soup long ago! Welcome to the 'family'. What a great rendering. I look forward to seeing more just as exquisite.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/21/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 1/19/2018 5:07:00 PM
welcome to PS...to be honest with you when I look at anyone who draws my interest I will look for their spirit, for we are all nothing more than skin covered souls...again welcome
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/19/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work.
Date: 1/16/2018 3:54:00 PM
what a beautiful portrayal of a woman, welcome to soup Dimpra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/16/2018 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Jan. X
Date: 1/15/2018 6:16:00 AM
Nice to see NZ represented on new poet list again. Excellent first poem. Just keep writing from the heart and stay true to your unique style and have fun. You will then find the urge to write will stay and your poems increase in number and diversity. Best regards David in NZ
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/16/2018 8:15:00 PM
Very kind of you to say so. Thank you.
Date: 1/10/2018 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful first poem Dimpra, look forward to reading more, regards, Kevin
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/10/2018 9:22:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 1/10/2018 7:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful written poem, I really enjoyed it,different people see different things but the most important is the soul, a good heart is way better than a good face, as you ask the readers, I see the imperfections that how some time some imperfections make someone so perfect for you, good luck and welcome on poetrysoup, I really like your poem here and continue to write, I ll be looking for your poems
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Date: 1/10/2018 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words.
Date: 1/8/2018 6:20:00 AM
Very thoughtful and telling. Also well free versed and penned.
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/8/2018 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Ronald.
Date: 1/2/2018 6:37:00 PM
Really dig the line "soft as birdsong with the sting of summer lightning." Nice poem. Title drew me in.
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:03:00 PM
Thank you. Very happy that you liked it.
Date: 1/1/2018 3:01:00 PM
- A great poem, Dimpra :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup - Best wishes for a happy new year - hugs // Sun :)
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 1/1/2018 6:50:00 PM
Thank you. Happy New Year to you too x
Date: 12/30/2017 8:21:00 AM
Great first post Dimpra, welcome to poetry soup..
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 12/30/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/30/2017 2:59:00 AM
A lovely poem... Man is not a man without a woman... All the best to you and yours, Dimpra
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Dimpra Kaleem
Date: 12/30/2017 9:01:00 AM
Thank you.

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