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With Hushed Thoughts

In solitude, I find calming breath between spaces Emptiness filled without the sound it replaces The silence against time in a rush to conclude I find calming breath between spaces, in solitude With these hushed thoughts I give voice to creation See ink form words full of haunting flirtation Or quietly smooth out the lived-in rough knots I give voice to creation with these hushed thoughts Within sacred walls there are moments of aloneness Times that life gives itself over to our fearlessness Pen responds to the dawning light when magic calls There are moments of aloneness within sacred walls 6-10-2020 Swap The Verse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 6/11/2020 9:24:00 AM
Awesome write Jeanne--you did a great job swapping the verses.
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:03:00 AM
Calming breath between spaces in solitude....I could easily relate with your hushed thoughts. Those moments within sacred walls give us the time for introspection and for our muse. God bless you and much love Jeanne. Best wishes for the contest :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/11/2020 9:12:00 AM
Hello Aditi...I'm happy we relate the same as I love reading your words too. Everyone needs a moment to tap their creative side. :D
Date: 6/11/2020 8:39:00 AM
Very nicely executed Jeanne...a top winner in my court my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/11/2020 9:10:00 AM
all the best to you also WW. My mind has been enjoying a couple of days of solitude away from home...
Date: 6/10/2020 9:03:00 PM
sometimes solitude is all we need to be able to breathe deeper...I liked this one... best wishes in the contest! Wonderful penning! :) hugs
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/11/2020 9:08:00 AM
I am doing a bit of solitude and writing the last couple of days...which has been wonderful. Thanks for your thoughts.

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