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With Hot Flames Lapping In Savory Fires

With Hot Flames Lapping In Savory Fires

Our worlds were flying so close, side by side
yours in beauty , mine in very deep pain.
Fate, that life painter, caused our great collide
we victims, blessed in our loving gain.

Stars fell apart , crashing of burning sun,
super nova lit our swelling desires.
Our long sweet ride that moment had begun,
hot flames lapping in savory fires.

Your eyes drew me into another dream
your voice angels begged to imitate.
Each touch, my body burning hot steam
nights our senses entered another state.

As time sealed our union in sweetest bliss
memories thus born, gave our love its shine.
Your all , put into every blessed kiss
and you dear heart forever to be mine.

Each morn, sends me into another dream,
the sight of your naked body in bed.
Always enough, to swim there in your stream,
paradise floating in my grateful head.

Poem Syllable Counter Results
Syllables Per Line:
10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10
Total # Syllables: 200
Total # Lines: 24 (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:
Total # Words: 148

Robert J. Lindley, 4-17-2016

Written for Teppo's contest.. 
WRITTEN TO THIRD SONG. Speak Softly Love-- by Andy Williams,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 4/25/2016 3:59:00 AM
Greetings Robert. Congrats for your awesome WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:26:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Robert.
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Date: 4/22/2016 7:18:00 AM
Hi Robert, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Once again your gentle words do touch the heart and stir the feelings within. The flow so smoothly takes us along as if in a dream. Romance ever blooms my friend. Love does speak so softly through your words Robert. Long may your heart sing my friend. This piece is a definite seven and into my faves....Mike.
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:37:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n win.. big congrats Robert..
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Date: 4/21/2016 8:18:00 PM
Robert, U did a wonderful job here. It is really very romantic.....specially last stanza. Awesome start and brilliant ending. Congratulation on ur win...............with love.
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:30:00 PM
Robert, I am so happy to see this a top winner my friend. Beautiful and romantic! Very deserving of your top placement! #7 ; )
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Date: 4/21/2016 1:17:00 PM
A fine romantic win Mr. Lindley, congratulations to you Sir...
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:49:00 AM
Congratulation my lovely friend on your superb win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win! Loved it !
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:17:00 AM
My friend, this is so beautifully romantic! Congratulations and a 7 on your well-deserved top win! Hugs and blessings. Pandita
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Date: 4/21/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for entering my Gren's Evergreens (Golden Oldies) # 1 contest, Robert, and congratulations on your win. T.J
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/21/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thanks for placing my poem my friend. I hope you may consider one day sponsoring a sonnet based(AS IN ANY SONNET FORM) contest, with subject matter to be of the poet's own choosing. As nobody could ever question in any way you ability to judge sonnets...or IMHO YOUR FAIRNESS IN DOING SO..
Date: 4/18/2016 4:59:00 PM
Wow Robert, what a sensuous beauty you have created for this contest. You were truly inspired! I love this, written with taste and grace! #7 ;) I am faving this!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 4/21/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks my good friend.. I had no choice but to put my ALL into it since it was for my good friend Teppo's contest.