With Her Tempting Pose

Her tempting pout bounces
from night's artwork like a slow fire that churns 
a raw desire in need to be quenched ...
and it is so mysteriously enchanting: to be
entrapped by that feminine aura 
that simply blazes on a spotlight of lure--
red-tossed hair flitting along
tangy whiffs of potion absolute,
unrestrained: how her blazed glimpses
pulse within contours of her appeal

that minstrel stars collapse...


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Roy Jerden's East Jesus' Contest
12/24/2014
~ inspiration from picture no.7 ( last photo)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/3/2015 7:51:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/3/2015 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. An excellent thought is penned well. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win nette
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Date: 1/3/2015 5:53:00 AM
Congrats on the fine win and nice take on the theme,
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Date: 1/3/2015 12:08:00 AM
oh gee, I forget what the last photo was. you should put it with the poem, Nette. anyway, you captured its essence with great flair! congrats on your worthy win.
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:51:00 PM
Nette, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:09:00 PM
congratulations Nette of this fine win, well done
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:53:00 PM
Nette, what wonderful interpretation and imagery from that photo! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/2/2015 12:23:00 PM
Great one nette.Congratulations on win. Hugs!> RAJAT
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM
Another hot cake like" Her raw cannal" ; I must say I really enjoy it nette,congrats on the win...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:17:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations nette on your win with this stunning write. I think you chose the most difficult of images, Marilyn Monroe as a strawberry blond and then did an amazing job of pulling this excellent write from it.
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Date: 1/2/2015 9:50:00 AM
Been awesome Nette! Great paint my friend! Wishing u a very happy n prosperous new year 2015!
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Date: 12/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
Yes, I've seen that photo (reminded me of Marlene Monroe) and you did wonders eliciting these seductive lines just from a face. To be honest, I think this poem is a better painting than the original picture! Well done!! // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM
....back with congratulations Nette...very merited!
Date: 12/27/2014 2:03:00 PM
What has poured forth from your pen here, is a magical, mystical portrait. Hope you have a fantastic new year.
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:39:00 AM
Nette, beautiful painting you have painted with your pen. Merry Christmas & a very Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true
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Date: 12/25/2014 8:50:00 AM
I am not only impressed.I was totally involved by the mystique of your seamless, creative poem! I looked at the visual and you really turned the scene around. Have a fine holiday, Nette
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:50:00 AM
amazing write Nette, beautifully tempting and seductive.
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Date: 12/25/2014 5:32:00 AM
"The shimmer of her alchemy draws gasping breaths like evening gaslights" ...Superb!! You have a beautiful poetic turn of phrase, Nette. All the very best for Christmas and the New Year. Cheers!!! :-) john.
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Date: 12/24/2014 5:13:00 PM
You create a montage of images with sensuality and elegance. That's a classy woman! Very visual and brilliant poem, so alive! Merry Christmas, Nette
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:53:00 PM
such brilliant imagery Nette - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/24/2014 3:34:00 PM
Wonderful! You always leave me inspired...happy holidays to you and your family, Nette. May the blessings of love and peace be yours...hugs, Rhonda
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