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With Her Tempting Pose

Her tempting pout bounces from night's artwork like a slow fire that churns a raw desire in need to be quenched ... and it is so mysteriously enchanting: to be entrapped by that feminine aura that simply blazes on a spotlight of lure-- red-tossed hair flitting along tangy whiffs of potion absolute, unrestrained: how her blazed glimpses pulse within contours of her appeal that minstrel stars collapse... -------------- Roy Jerden's East Jesus' Contest 12/24/2014 ~ inspiration from picture no.7 ( last photo)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/3/2015 7:51:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/3/2015 7:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win my lovely friend. An excellent thought is penned well. Loved always,bl

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 1/3/2015 6:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/3/2015 5:53:00 AM

Congrats on the fine win and nice take on the theme,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2015 12:08:00 AM

oh gee, I forget what the last photo was. you should put it with the poem, Nette. anyway, you captured its essence with great flair! congrats on your worthy win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/2/2015 11:51:00 PM

Nette, Interesting topic, poem and win. CONGRATULATIONS!!! Goodnight ~LINDA~

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 1/2/2015 7:09:00 PM

congratulations Nette of this fine win, well done

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/2/2015 1:53:00 PM

Nette, what wonderful interpretation and imagery from that photo! Congratulations on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/2/2015 12:23:00 PM

Great one nette.Congratulations on win. Hugs!> RAJAT

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM

Another hot cake like" Her raw cannal" ; I must say I really enjoy it nette,congrats on the win...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/2/2015 10:17:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Nette:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/2/2015 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations nette on your win with this stunning write. I think you chose the most difficult of images, Marilyn Monroe as a strawberry blond and then did an amazing job of pulling this excellent write from it.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/2/2015 9:50:00 AM

Been awesome Nette! Great paint my friend! Wishing u a very happy n prosperous new year 2015!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/27/2014 2:41:00 PM

Yes, I've seen that photo (reminded me of Marlene Monroe) and you did wonders eliciting these seductive lines just from a face. To be honest, I think this poem is a better painting than the original picture! Well done!! // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 1/2/2015 10:50:00 AM

....back with congratulations Nette...very merited!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/27/2014 2:03:00 PM

What has poured forth from your pen here, is a magical, mystical portrait. Hope you have a fantastic new year.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/25/2014 10:39:00 AM

Nette, beautiful painting you have painted with your pen. Merry Christmas & a very Happy New Year and may all your wishes and dreams come true

Zelene Desha

Date: 12/25/2014 8:50:00 AM

I am not only impressed.I was totally involved by the mystique of your seamless, creative poem! I looked at the visual and you really turned the scene around. Have a fine holiday, Nette

John Lawless

Date: 12/25/2014 5:50:00 AM

amazing write Nette, beautifully tempting and seductive.

John Fleming

Date: 12/25/2014 5:32:00 AM

"The shimmer of her alchemy draws gasping breaths like evening gaslights" ...Superb!! You have a beautiful poetic turn of phrase, Nette. All the very best for Christmas and the New Year. Cheers!!! :-) john.

Amelie Mara

Date: 12/24/2014 5:13:00 PM

You create a montage of images with sensuality and elegance. That's a classy woman! Very visual and brilliant poem, so alive! Merry Christmas, Nette

Jan Allison

Date: 12/24/2014 3:53:00 PM

such brilliant imagery Nette - good luck with the contest:-) hugs Jan x

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/24/2014 3:34:00 PM

Wonderful! You always leave me inspired...happy holidays to you and your family, Nette. May the blessings of love and peace be yours...hugs, Rhonda