With Her Halo All Askew

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No butterflies at Christmas time, you and I know why 
they'd freeze their wings and wouldn't stand a chance 
inside this wintry Palace of snow and fanfare glow. 
But little Suz with her happy trails of dreams galore 
asked Santa for a butterfly, she wanted nothing more.
 One with summer wings that could dart, flit, and fly
one that could light the room like a cloudless blue sky
one that could take her away to a place oh, so high. 
Upon this firmament of earth what would a holiday be 
without the assistance of a magic fairy's glee  
So, it was on that diamond studded Holy night 
that a fairy appeared wearing wings way too tight 
she nipped at her pillow and whispered in her ear 
"Help me get these pinions off, won't you be a dear!" 
Little Suz with eyes so big touched the spongy wings of blue  
they were warm and cradle soft, filled with morning dew 
Soon the fairy left her side off to Netherland she flew 
to get another pair of wings, with her Halo all askew.

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Date: 11/25/2022 1:17:00 PM
Delightful! Written, not just skillfully, but with great sensitivity and love. A wonderful tale for children and adults alike. Blessings!
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Date: 11/25/2022 7:51:00 PM
Thank you Joe I love telling stories, of all kinds, :)
Date: 11/25/2022 9:56:00 AM
Rose, you have no idea how much I like this. From the first to the final lyric, the entire thing exudes tenderness and is crafted with such skill.
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Date: 11/25/2022 11:19:00 AM
Thank you Sotto, for stopping by, your words touch the soul
Date: 11/25/2022 6:24:00 AM
I absolutely love this Rose….didn't want it to end ….so sweet! Debx
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Date: 11/25/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Deb, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/25/2022 5:53:00 AM
Very original.
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Date: 11/25/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, for reading and commenting
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