With Her

hair like gold
smiles sweeter than angels words,
your beauty dances with my mind
as I think of your voice.
These things cant describe
your awesomeness, your heart
and soul.
Only an attempt is made 
to form real words of your grace.
This world is full of lies
and the truth will remain 
for as long as I have you
I will not falter.
your heart is what keeps me around,
your eyes gives you the power to see 
into my hearts darkest corners.
Skin that is so soft,
I tremble for every time my hand
grasps hold of yours.
Your trust and friendship
Has carried me through ruff times.
It will continue to push me forward
into this dark and frigid earth.
These words I hold dear to my soul
For you will only know maybe half
of the words that will describe 
this passion I hold for you.
The other half,
I must show you
by holding, kissing, and loving you.
Im unsure of my path but I won't be
frightened by the evils in this world,
.......................for I know your there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007


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Date: 7/10/2016 11:34:00 PM
BRANDON, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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