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With Hands That Weep

It was a liquid wall – a wave so exceptionally massive Foreboding and catching unawares, tossing into passive Submission of bodily functions violently shaken White noise crashing through sandy pores Tearing fingers along broken bottles to Billions of bubbles bursting between salty motes Sucking hideous gulps of brine in lung full rotes Where serenity hides amongst coral flutes To seek you out and shove you deep As a soul is crossed and taken by reap With hands that weep Across a soundless plain Devoid of pleasure, yet not of pain A journey through light, a glittering void Filled with those seeking past and present Where worlds collide to anoint a soul Before the hands of time; and Commit to dust, a body belonging To the ordinary world Where loved ones drip upon a wasted shore To hunch and punch A chest that’s cold to disbelief at Eyes that speak through windowless souls Of a place that’s reached beyond The hands that scream and weep Over a body that belonged to the ordinary world Anthony Slausen’s Poetry Contest – Near Death Experience 24 Oct 2014

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Date: 12/6/2014 11:00:00 AM
I give this a very healthy super 7 my friend. Flow, rhythm and message stirred the mind to ponder the darkness beyond and the blessings of life in the here and now. Good luck in the contest...
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Mark Trichet
Date: 12/10/2014 1:58:00 AM
Hey Robert, thanks for kind words
Date: 11/6/2014 6:14:00 AM
such vivid imagery I found this so chilling to read mark many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2014 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Mark. To bad you had to kill him off.
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Date: 10/26/2014 12:01:00 PM
oh my gosh, what brilliant writing this. I had to read it twice to make sure I got it, but it has to be someone that is rescued from a drowning. So sad. So well described!! I thought the person died, but because the contest is called near death, it could be that he lives!!! a SEVEN
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Mark Trichet
Date: 10/26/2014 5:55:00 PM
Why thanks Andrea, your comments truly mean a lot to me. I did "kill" him off in the end...although it is a near death experience, I guess he just got a little to near to it! :) (Entirely fictional) Thanks for the 7!!

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