With Glowing Soft Colors In Rainbow Hues

With Glowing Soft Colors In Rainbow Hues

Romantic night of given heart, my sweet
whatever shall dearest life truly be?
Your softest touch and gentle heartbeat,
mermaid swimming in my romantic sea.

I hold only dreams of your beating heart
with glowing soft colors in rainbow hues.
Praying daily that we shall never part
that my life never meets such dreaded blues.

May we live lost within your finest dance
while sleeping beside meadow flowers glow.
Your love dwells in finest, purest romance,
in a blessed gift joined, I pray to know.

Your dance swept me completely off my feet.
Forever my life joined with your heartbeat.

 10-26-2015

Note- Sonnet on romance , one hundred words, perfect tens.

Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10
Total # Syllables:	140
Total # Lines:	17 (Including empty lines)
Words with (syllables) counted programmatically:	
Total # Words:	100
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Lindley Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 8:06 PM
Thanks all for the congrats. Have been quite sick lately. So not commenting very much.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 11:27 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Robert!
Haight Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 5:10 PM
Such a beautiful tribute to your love, Robert, in your perfect Sonnet. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
Cheema Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 1:04 AM
Congrats on your soft colours of romance! Balveen
Tor Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Deserving first place Robert. Congratulations! On your win!!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Robert, I so like the mermaid line.. sweet and lovely, is this dedicated to your wife? wow!! lovely imagery and heartfelt purity!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Lindley Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 8:58 PM
Thanks Olive. Mermaids have always interested me since my days of youth and my reading everything on mythology that I could find.
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