Notes About The Poem

27 April 2026
For 'This or That Contest"
'With Fingers Crossed'
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

finger trap

With Fingers Crossed

Hands behind my back
my fate is on the line cast
into the abyss
a hit or miss bite for me
on the fly, I sent to see.

Chance and choice entwined
a fragile bridge over doubt
serendipity
in cold empathy with fate
pressed tense, taut, fingers hard.

Criss-crossed with hope's twine,
I bargain with the unseen
with fate's mouth agape
waiting to see the outcome
of the Chinese finger cuffs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:16 PM
Wonderfully written Tanka, John. I enjoyed reading. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Anderson Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:33 PM
WOW, thanks very much for your feedback. All the best
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