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4/25/2026 for This or That, Vol 38 Poetry Contest sponsored by Edward Ibeh

With Fingers Crossed

A child, when you first painfully surmised, 
that love is something to be won or lost,
the victim of a winning player's lies,
when early on your youthful heart was crossed. 

So, like many aspiring men before, 
it would be your inevitable fate 
in life and love, to try to pry a door,
by learning to scheme and manipulate.

Yet, strangely, the conquests you have enjoyed, 
with each bittersweet passing victory, 
are experiences empty and void. 
The winner isn't really you, you see - 

as, you've lost yourself, and incurred the cost,
in living, loving, with your fingers crossed.
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Miller Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 3:20 AM
A lot of sonnets in this competition, an excellent one from yourself, congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 9:56 PM
You are getting quite adept with the wonderful sonnet form. Big congrats here. We both did sonnets
Crandall Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 7:50 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
Ibeh Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:07 PM
Marvelously composed sonnet, David. I love reading this. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Crandall Avatar
May 15, 2026 at 6:21 PM
Thanks Edward - I enjoyed your contest!
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