With Blistered Feet

O night sky and falling stars
Allow a wish unto me
With sunken eyes and trembling heart
With blistered feet do I plead

Find he who trampled these fields
So filled and fueled by greed
And curse the sword he wields
Thus his corpse the vultures feed

These willing men who battled he
Deserved not their pain
They tilled and grew these seeds
Their actions done in vain

For who has torn this land apart?
And left naught but debris?
O night sky and falling stars
With blistered feet do I plead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Theraven Avatar
March 30, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Connor, This is an interesting poem. Very well written, you breathed life into it. -Richard
Shariff Avatar
March 5, 2020 at 12:52 PM
Brilliantly penned, Connor. Just keep on writing. All the best!
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