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With Blistered Feet

O night sky and falling stars Allow a wish unto me With sunken eyes and trembling heart With blistered feet do I plead Find he who trampled these fields So filled and fueled by greed And curse the sword he wields Thus his corpse the vultures feed These willing men who battled he Deserved not their pain They tilled and grew these seeds Their actions done in vain For who has torn this land apart? And left naught but debris? O night sky and falling stars With blistered feet do I plead

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Date: 3/30/2020 10:25:00 PM
Connor, This is an interesting poem. Very well written, you breathed life into it. -Richard
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Date: 3/5/2020 12:52:00 PM
Brilliantly penned, Connor. Just keep on writing. All the best!
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