With Blinders On

God carved him from his finest cloth.
He gave and gave.
They drank his broth.
Most unaware of what was given,
with blinders on they kept on living.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2023 at 1:45 PM
Adam messed up and mankind has paid for it forever but someday all be made right. Looking for that day. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Kaufman Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:47 PM
thank you dear Sara. I appreciate your stopping by as well. Have a blessed day.
Hind Avatar
May 4, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Things are not what they appear. Great work!
Kaufman Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 1:47 PM
Hi Paige, Thanks for stopping by. I appreciate your kind words.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 7:49 AM
- Ignorant and totally blind ... great written, Nancy :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Oh yes you are good at these kinds of poems.
Kaufman Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 2:48 PM
thanks Andrea. I'm sure it's my muse, not moi.
Turner Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 8:40 AM
So true, Nancy. I like this one a lot:) Good read and great food for thought:)
Kaufman Avatar
April 24, 2023 at 2:49 PM
appreciate your feedback Daniel. I am still laughing about your coffee poem and love sharing it with friends. It's such a wonderful write.
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