With Bated Breath

When you left me in mild mid-summer twilight
I heard you say you’d return on a silvery night
Through the dust of full moon of spring when
Hues would flush the first rose of my garden.

Beyond the blue haze of bright night’s beguiled
And ardent ambience I saw you disappear while
The rush of thoughts swept my mind with tense
Expectations shrouded by a nebulous suspense
Defined by the design of my dreams I’d dreamed.

Bereft of the zest my loveless languished time lone
Raced on pensive plateau with changing seasons.
Early in spring in the sapling of rose I’d planted
A bud unfurled pink petals to bloom enchanted.
Till the full moon shined on my first rose I waited
Holding fragile heart at the edge with bated breath.

August 25, 2019
Title chosen : With Bated Breath
Contest : Pick A Title, Vol 8-Acrostic
Sponsor : Edward Ibeh
June 5, 2020
Contest : Brian's Select 5
Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Date: 9/7/2019 9:53:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations. Blessings too. Thank you for such a rare poem.
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Date: 9/7/2019 8:19:00 PM
Subimal, your entry captured my heart! It is beautifully composed incorporating the acrostic letters seamlessly and brilliantly! Congratulations on your deserving win! Your entry is a Fave for me my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/7/2019 2:50:00 PM
- Beautiful with romance, Subimal :) - Congratulations on your 1st place win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/7/2019 11:52:00 AM
Splendid poem, Subimal:-) Congratulations on your first place win my contest!
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