With Apologies

Sometimes, when in her bedroom, she

and I would talk and wonder,

while heavy laden trucks gear shifted down the hill with trees,

we would talk, and wonder 

if it was,and if it was, why should it be,

if whiskey did taste better after sex than tea.

We might have guessed which one was best

While heavy laden trucks gear shifted down the hill with trees.

We could have guessed.

it seems to me,

we should have guessed

that whiskey just tastes crap straight after tea.
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November 1, 2014 at 7:21 AM
Splendid!
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