With a Rose

I had to pick the perfect shade of red,
That perfectly complimented your skin,
Pressed against your nose, your lips, and your chin,
As it slowly moved away from your head.
So, your lovely long neck happily led
Where it was going, from where it had been,
Down to where the twin desires of men
Allowed all of their passions to be fed.
This silky seducer started to slide
Down your stomach, in the eye of a blink,
And you smiled, as it continued to glide
In a way that would make both of us think.
Then, finally, it was ready to hide
In the spot where red would give way to pink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 10:17 AM
w-eeeeeeeee your poems are so ... mmmm i won't even say,..p.d.
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Passionate one, i enjoy the way you play with your words, makes one think further .. Now I'm wondering why I never came across your work earlier.. Rgds WN
Trevino Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 10:45 AM
such a passionate write Dakarai, very sentual =(^.^)=Royal
Cobb Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 1:23 PM
thank you ladies. i always "aim" to please.
A   Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 1:09 PM
Yes Doc. and exactly how did I inspire this.,,,lol,,,you are to much...but the rose I like...enjoyed your poem...you really are something Doc. Sounds as if your mind is lost in the g___ter of the one who inspired this,,,me ,,,,,lol,,to cool,..p.d.
Hales Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 12:46 PM
WOW !!! Thats got me thinking ...really like d your write sarah x
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