With a Quick Flick

I read a poem and will save,
      'cause of feelings it gave;
where there is emotion within the words,
that flutter and fly off the page like birds.
        I do love those tear-jerking writes,
and those beautiful sweet nature delights;
a wild thriller, unrestrained and intense,
        a treasure with awesome suspense.
      These poems make me click;
    with a quick flick!

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December 3, 2019


Poetry/Rhyme/With A Quick Flick
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1204-922-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the contest, Fave
sponsor, Line Gauthier

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Na Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 12:51 AM
Congrats on your winning poem :)~ Constance
La France Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Greg, thanks for the congrats !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance. Very nice depiction of your favorite poems.
La France Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Subimal, thanks for the congratulations and your sweet comment !
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 10:46 PM
##never mind Lachlin's comment, he does not understand poetry## I wonder why he couldn't.. A poet without imagination is but a disaster.. He was seeking attention in a nasty way..
La France Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Jenish, happy to report that admin has removed Lachlin's un-poetic comments but not him, but I blocked him so hopefully that is the end of him on my poetry page.
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 4:35 AM
It is my personal experience dear Lachlin Smith.. The words carrying the emotions flutter around me like birds.. lol..
La France Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Jenish, oh I wish Lachlin would fly off this page !
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 4:45 AM
hahah.. I like your comment.. It is poetic with a rhythm.. lol... lose screws.. As somebody said, poets are half nut..
Somadas Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 3:29 AM
..where there is emotion within the words, that flutter and fly off the page like birds... Beautiful lines..
La France Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 4:40 PM
Jenish, thank you for visiting my poem and for the beautiful, never mind Lachlin's comment, he does not understand poetry if he does not know how words fly like birds off pages but we know !
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